Mock

Here is the first draft of my music video. I feel like it was unsuccessful and I am not happy with it. However it was a good opportunity for my to practice filming, and editing in order to get a better outcome from this. I have given my self a list of improvements that I will carry out in the near future of this project. These improvements include
1) Making the video in colour, not just black and white.
2) Re-filming the footage in front of the black certain so that I can use better lighting and so that the Molly isn't laughing in sections.
3) Re-film the dance in the dance studio to avoid getting the worksheets on the wall that ruin the mise-en-scene.
4) Film more close up shots so there is a wider range of cinematography used and so that the viewers will feel closer to Molly.
5) Create and get a flow of narrative through the video. Make it clear what the story is through the filming and acting.